Fragrance (Haiku) Comments

A full moon is doing wonderful job in a cup of tea. Good imagination.

A lovely poem.... thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it and reading it some more.

in this cup of tea i smell the jasmine flower is it a full moon? - - - -Wow- - I instantly feel the fragrance that a full moon brings.A great haiku.

I can smell the jasmine too! Great one!

A most wondrous haiku, Govind. My poetic response: Artistic Poet Intelligent mind Vivid imagery Artistry of poet

truly good, Govind. The 'full moon' can be taken as an Autumn Kigo (the 'moon', when no further specification is given, is traditionally a kigo for Autumn in Japan) . Some would say it is a 'gendai' haiku (so called 'modern' haiku) , but I prefer to see it as a 'traditional' haiku. Only 1 point: haiku (traditional haiku) have no titile ;) Thanks for sharing

Thank you for another haiku with a twist at the end.

Another great haiku, well done!

Silk like quality to this poem, each time i come to the website, i always read it.

Getting one whole good world on the tip of a finger is no easy job. Some like GR can do that. Wonderful. X

What an interesting comparison/ image and impression you've created in my mind. Well done. Thanks.

Incredible! After each read, I pause to take it in, and then read it again.

Yes, I saw and smelled the moon.

Beautiful! Some of the great pleasures of life coming together.

Simple, direct, like a shaft of moonlight streaking toward its target

Beautifully written. You understand the form well. Thank you

Yess...I miss NOLA now!

Very nice... from this tiny seed grows a blossom.

magic haiku, it made me feel like i was sitting on the moon, looking at the earth and enjoying some jasmine tea. thank you for transporting me there.

masterpiece young poet, great imagination and exquisite creativity! keep up these haikus.