Sunday, November 22, 2015

Fragrance Comments

Rating: 4.8

Thorn pierces blood from stem,
to make rose ever red.
Blossoms it to attract every eye,
and win all heart in the process.
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M. Asim Nehal
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 April 2024

Brilliantly Bravo-worthy piece TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

The final stanza says the Truth and nothing but The TRUTH. Gorgeously worded.5 Stars and TFS

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Bill Cantrell 09 April 2024

I come back to read this poem myself, Asim Nehal is a genuine poet as this poem starts out with pain with a sharing a fragrance

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Bill Cantrell 01 February 2024

This is absolutely brilliant, , each stanza is a poem in itself, this is one of the best poems I've ever read

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Denis Mair 16 November 2023

The rose is a good emblem of beauty's inextricable tie to suffering.

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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

Another far reaching and beautiful poem!

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me poet yeps poet 31 May 2022

HELLO MAN YOU R THE BEST POETMAN

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

MUST BE: you are the best poet, methinks

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Vidyapati Jalan 04 February 2022

🌹 and its fragrance around me.

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Kevin Patrick 22 December 2021

A stellar write, how something as beautiful as a rose can still cause pain, yet carry beauty. wonderful work

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David Wood 22 December 2021

When you refer to the one you love you refer her to a rose. Soft yet tough with a fragrant scent. A good 5*

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2021

The pain and suffering of thorn never goes in vain....absolutely correct! A perfumed poem.

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Indira Renganathan 09 November 2021

wonderful write...words in the last stanza support greatly this poem...lovely and interesting to read...5*****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

This poem carries engaging fragrance!

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Deepak S S 20 May 2021

Fragrance of rose all over now, Stars in full.

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M Asim Nehal 10 May 2021

In this new PH format, reply yo individual does not function properly.

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M Asim Nehal 10 May 2021

Thanks to one and all for your heartwarming comments.

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roses, they our choice, not for their crimson color, but for the purity with an honor

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Zuzu Mutairi 07 April 2021

Nicely thought poem.

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Joycee Jo 26 March 2021

Only pain can bring such fragrance.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 March 2021

An original thought expressed so well. You are a true poet.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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