Fragments of my mind
Are accompanying you
I have never had this kind
Horrifying me
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a surreal picture; i don't mean the poem. the poem leaves questions unanswered! well, some will like the uncertainty is leaves in their minds; they can make up their own answers. at first i thought some 'accident' caused stanzas to be repeated, until i read the ending line. quite effective. bri :)
Thank you for your well meant responses, Bri and of course for your attentive reading. Most important matter in evaluating a poem. Thank you for your precious response. G.B.U. Amen
Fragments of my love Are accompanying you Why are you so quiet now No sign, no sound, No passion, no love-bound Your soliloquy is simply so fine........ liked it very much.... your thoughts fashioned inside the fragments....... than k u. tony
This soliloquy was created in 2011....WOW! What a time.....and you have read this in..... nearly the end of 2018.again a WOW! Thank you that you still like my simple words then. Simple words are not always simply fine, but these............ they are.........., G.B.U. Amen