Fragmented Thoughts Comments

Although our thoughts and lives can be fragmented, the fragments can be ordered and out of brokenness strength and health can prevail!

A gorgeous poem, so well composed! The imagery that you employ makes the impact of this piece powerful and relatable all at once! This is one of your best yet! Keep writing!

The last category is the best Mam as I see.Excellently expressed.

An inspired poem. Well done Rose Marie

Fine piece as always...... thanks for sharing this poem...

The ending is just so fitting, I pray I may be to you the one dwelling in your last stanza, I love it!