Sometimes our thoughts
pass like geese
flying in tandem.
Some cling like leeches
in the dendrites of the mind,
sucking our sanity.
Still others visit
from time to time
and tingle the mind,
inspiring our very soul--
giving a new lease on life.
Copyright 2025, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Although our thoughts and lives can be fragmented, the fragments can be ordered and out of brokenness strength and health can prevail!
A gorgeous poem, so well composed! The imagery that you employ makes the impact of this piece powerful and relatable all at once! This is one of your best yet! Keep writing!
The last category is the best Mam as I see.Excellently expressed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The ending is just so fitting, I pray I may be to you the one dwelling in your last stanza, I love it!