Fragility Comments

Son of the sea came back with a tide, And proposed you to become his bride, You turned down with a bitter smile, I was wrong you are not fragile! ..............lovely write....great

What a Spectacular poem..... Brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10

All constituents including smile and hope all things are fragile. Wonderful composition really. Nicely drafted.

A Beautiful poem. I agree with Valsa's comment. If given love and acceptance, she can prove herself, that she is not fragile. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading each lines.

Shakespeare's famous utterance 'Frailty thy name is woman' is often quoted in place and out of place'. Women are often taken to be frail and fragile! But indomitable strength lies in most of the women! If given love and acceptance, she can amaze the world sometimes! Thanks for this acknowledgement Akhtarji! 12

A beautiful message, in a beautiful poem, for a woman who is mistaken as fragile.................10