Fragility Comments

a beautifully written, lovely poem, ode to your late friends. great job :)

This is some lush language. I enjoyed very much too the way it ended.

To me, it says we're individual yet part of a whole, small yet precious and when we lose someone, it shakes us to our core, exposing the fragility of life taken by a cruel twist of fate. Lovely tribute.

a voice with a lot of warmth that is touching, yet it is a tribute to 2 dear friends you have lost.

I have no words after reading the poem what to comment......life on earth never be predicted we dont know causes when results hurt we mourn.......a great write....

Ahhh...im so sorry Kale.What a great ode to a friend.RIP to both of 'em.

The spectrum of size was captured well. Life is just temporal here on earth.

dear poet friend, you have a pure soul, through your kind words your friends will live on

sorry for ya man...this is a beautiful poem....describes exactly how short life can be...how sad life can be.... nice work 10++

This poem is a marvel, because it is written in a wide perspective, on a grave subject, and in spite if that, though one senses the tears, especially at the end, there is restrainst and dignity. Kale, these moments are life-changers. I'm glad you are a poet, and that your friends are remembered in this fashion. Maybe add the dates? Great work.

Soo true and sweet..................

Oh Kale, it is as near perfect as I can imagine it and it goes in my favorites this minute. I love it truly. Like red candle wax melted Like flame turned to ice. Gives me goose bumps! Warmest regards, Susan