Thursday, July 18, 2013

Fragile Trance.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

My thoughts were like a sludge
Unhealthy,
Faint with a bulge.
I was in deep trance..
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Maya Neelima
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Utsav Patel 20 February 2014

Wow.. You have skillfully painted your afflictions! In life when I thought I have no regrets and pain, underneath there may a vast blue yonder. Kudos! Read some of my poems.. Our writing is bit similar. Hope you'll like my work too.

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Biju Benjamin 21 September 2013

YOU, Spilled a drop of love, And i drowned my dreams in that......... In my loneliness, I wish to forget my trance.. My fragile love trance! nice...! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 18 July 2013

A great poem, sometimes we have to be strong.

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