Sunday, July 19, 2009

Fragile My Tears. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hearts sing long heavy melodies
When hurt presses salt to their core.
Lonliness pushes more thorns, corrosive
And guilt-edged, then, defensively,
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Fowler 29 July 2009

Your tears fall fragile as raindrops on the windowpanes of your soul in this luminous poem. Beautiful, my dear friend. Love, SandraX

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Lonliness pushes more thorns, corrosive And guilt-edged, then, defensively, Tears fall free...........as never before. tears fall free defensively..... mor philosophical touch and easy to understand..lovely presentation...10 read mine cry not... you go alone

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Tsira Goge 19 July 2009

Fay, Beautiful and sensitive the poem, which takes the soul so highly, ,10... All best, Tsira

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this is comforting........ and good as always...

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Viola Grey 19 July 2009

I didn't so much as read this poem, but feel it...wow Fay, this one grabs the heart...gorgeous.

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Bob Gibson 19 July 2009

Lost in loneliness, abandoned by love gone is the birdsong, along with the dove your heart may be broken, but your brains not impaired pen out your poems, then your love will be shared beautiful heart rendering poem Fay

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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