Eveytime I look at you I catch my breath,
Nothing can part us not even death,
My heart is spiralling flying up high,
Because your eyes hold me like the sky,
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nice flow. but love should not be fragile. however, it is your opinion. may be due to realization. but poetry is never fragile.
very heart touching poem Splendid! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !