Sunday, June 11, 2006

Fragile Heartbeats And Sensuous Mouth Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I close my eyes,
I can see you in a floral dress,
Happy and smiling;
I fall in love with you
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Uriah Hamilton
COMMENTS
Ebone' Ingram 01 January 2007

your soulful skill makes your memories vivid in my mind...how deliciously strange is that? i think i should read it again...just because it's really good. eni da kid

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Mary Nagy 15 June 2006

Sometimes the sweetest of memories can also bring us the most pain. I love how you manage to pain such pictures for us Uriah. Sincerely, Mary

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Ernestine Northover 12 June 2006

Sound very delicious dreams to me Uriah, great mind work here. Photogenic mind too. Love Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2006

A nostalgic summer snapshot time out of mind... Kind regards, Sandra

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Abigail Keller 11 June 2006

As usual, a beautiful and sentimental poem creating bursts of imagery. Perfect! ~Amber~

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***** ********* 11 June 2006

This poem has a very soft and gently encouraging voice Uriah! Very relaxing work. Thanks for sharing it, I am going to close my eyes now. Smiling at you, Tai

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