Fragile Comments
She's fragile, She's breaking,
through makeshift lies and the smile she's faking.
She's in denial, she is aching~
She's crying out, 'somebody save me..'
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Thank you guys, and yes suicide is never the best way out of sorrow.
Ah poignant but awesomely crafted. I esp lovd d last stanza, so brill melodramatic. But dont encourage her to suicide. Do pls review my latest poem.
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7/26/2025 6:27:18 AM # 1.0.0
I find this to be suicidal almost. However, creative nonetheless! Great write!