Fractured Violence Comments

Very sad story about violence against a young girl and jealousy in human heart. Thanks for sharing this story. Your writing makes the story known and our conscience is stirred.

what heart wrenching write sadiq, there was a similar incident here in Bangalore, where the small child child who worked as a maid was tortured, oil poured on her back, she was made to work day n night without clothes......sad, very sad. a commendable write.

And with ths poem you have given her a name and a voice instead of her just being a statistic. Thanks Sadiq for people like you.