Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Fractured Heart! Comments

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Today all I attend are the vacuous vows and fictions,
It leaves behind just a fractured heart and a wrecked life,
Today faith is gone and conviction is lost,
What am I fighting for and who will really pay the cost.
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SEEMA SHARMA
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 28 October 2017

Poet's PagePoemsCommentsStatsSend Message Poems by SEEMA SHARMA: 2 / 13 « prev. poem next poem » Fractured Heart! - Poem by SEEMA SHARMA Today all I attend are the vacuous vows and fictions, It leaves behind just a fractured heart and a wrecked life, Today faith is gone and conviction is lost, What am I fighting for and who will really pay the cost. When I tell you I ‘m sorry but I give in again, Why will you hold me, why will you cave in again. When you finally comprehend you made 10+++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2015

Marvellous expression. An intensive poem I Like most. Thanks for sharing dear Seema, keep the ball rolling. .......10

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Seema Sharma 23 September 2015

Thanks KM, really appreciated

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 September 2015

Today faith is gone and conviction is lost, When you finally comprehend you made a lapse, You are matured writer and a poetess. your observations and convictions are marvellous.. thank you

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Seema Sharma 23 September 2015

Thanks Tony, your comments are highly motivating

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