Fractionated Second Comments

just a fraction of a second..if its tears, its okay but if its for the rainbow..for the love..it should be forever... nice lines MM

Yeah i liked the poetic tongue in this one good write

Hmm…contemplative occult poem… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

An abstract verse full of reflection. Not allowing past to influence present is liberation. Liked the verse much.

another fantastic one its a very good write and some of u r lines are really very good.

'Our fractured sight trying to catch...The glimpse of the light'.Few lines in this write are composed brilliantly. Once again your write is touching and moving.