Fractionated Second Poem by Marieta Maglas

Fractionated Second

Rating: 5.0


Fractionated Second



Sentiment evaporating,
Wind's strong vitality drying any awakening,
Old memory eating the time,
Fractured sight trying to catch
The glimpse of the light up to the point, where
It starts melting down,
That light is broken up into a rainbow of colors,
Those colors in a given reason to create a new one,
Tangled thought churning
Any aching mind,
Voice being like a crushed green velvet,
while reaching its echoes,
Old words being disorderly heard everywhere,
While scratching the memory.
Tears leaving the eyes, and washing the scars of the soul,
When the soul keeps frozen the fractionated second,
A body is a self-aware machine,
In its time of need to protect its existence.





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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 06 April 2010

'Our fractured sight trying to catch...The glimpse of the light'.Few lines in this write are composed brilliantly. Once again your write is touching and moving.

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Ying Escalona 19 April 2010

just a fraction of a second..if its tears, its okay but if its for the rainbow..for the love..it should be forever... nice lines MM

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Eyan Desir 15 April 2010

Yeah i liked the poetic tongue in this one good write

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 April 2010

Hmm…contemplative occult poem… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 08 April 2010

An abstract verse full of reflection. Not allowing past to influence present is liberation. Liked the verse much.

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Anju Addanki 08 April 2010

another fantastic one its a very good write and some of u r lines are really very good.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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