Monday, April 15, 2019

Fourth Pillar Bearing Great Stress Comments

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Call me tattered estate, I care less,
Call me even a prestitute press,
Paint me jaundiced yellow,
My aura has halo,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 April 2019

Muse! I have my hallow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 April 2019

Thanks for visiting my poem, Edward Louis.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2019

Paint me jaundiced yellow, But I have my hallow...........amazing expression! Enjoyed the fun! Well penned sir.......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 April 2019

Your absence was noticeable, Dr Swain and thanks for the feedback.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2019

Paint me jaundiced yellow, But I have my hallow

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

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