Friday, February 12, 2021

Fourteen Lines - To My ❤️ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear heart, do not make me restless;
And my body a burden on my soul.
I have things to do and many tasks to accomplish,
Tell me, thou lov'st me from inside,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Varsha M 22 May 2021

This is a beautiful expression. Yes love's veil is the most protective layer and gives best protection.

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Amaya H 14 February 2021

Excellent poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 13 February 2021

Opps, didn't mean to say beautifully expressed twice, but powerful just the same! .. Many blessings dear poet! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 13 February 2021

My thoughts are just in short, , , to yours.... May your heart find kindness down every road chosen! ...

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Rebecca Navarre 13 February 2021

To love and live life of pure heart and not be led astray by other desires and interests of this world. And to be loved the same in return. Beautifully expressed! .. Beautifully expressed! .. In hopes i am understanding, powerfully moving! ..... Definite 5 Stars! ..............

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Kostas Lagos 13 February 2021

Once again a masterpiece my friend!

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Darren Jkoeryo 12 February 2021

❤ rules the life and head tries to control. A wonderful poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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