Monday, January 7, 2013

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Smoking in the door
Smoking from the rain
Loud at night experts
Hellow Geezer through traffic
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michael oliver
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Luscious Larry 07 January 2013

The Dogg says you're boffo, and dang it, he's right. Loud at night experts! That is sublime, man!

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Scotty Dogg 07 January 2013

Yes! This is excellent poetry. I think you 'achieve' a great deal. The author knows how to Put The Words Together. I love 'prattled' and 'My certainties soft bloom...' Recommending!

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