Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Four Walls Comments

Rating: 2.8

Lets get out of here
I think you’ve seen too much of these four walls
Lets take you somewhere you can be free
To be the man that you’ve always wanted to be
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Sara Tehrani
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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

Let's get out to explore this beautiful world. Nicely written.

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Christopher Flynn 03 July 2009

Life has so much to share If we can break down our walls And experience it. Nice poem I like the style of thought in it.

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Anjali Sinha 08 June 2009

lovely poem dear sara dont get claustrophobic --good write

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Aashish Ameya 05 June 2009

good one Sara, not even home, but every relationship should set us free.

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Saadat Tahir 27 May 2009

hi sara aakum this ais a uniquely beautiful poem...u can be rightly proud of it im really impressed it so simple and fluid yet it portrays a complex unterstanduing of the human psyche you did well there...see if u have time 'Scary monsters...Psychic salsa' its atenner cheers

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It's hard to let go Or dropp your walls Nice poem 10 ~Unique~

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