Four Things Inspired Me! Comments

Amazing write. I just loved it. Fours things are truth and inspiring ones. The last lines ++++10.

SIR MY 4 THINGS U ONLY NOW..

So true... innocence, experience, the knowledge of right and wrong.. all these things makes up a man truly.. Love is a fine toy... wonderful message in the poem....

This poem is truly breath taking. This by far is my favorite of yours so far. amazing poem, as are all of your poems.

I had to read it a couple of times to try and capture it's essence. Innocence, love, truth makes us pure as gold, shining brilliantly like the stars, sun, moon. We can be the light others follow in darkness...

'Stars tinkle in the sky Moon shines in the night Sun glitters in the noon Man shines in the truth' Yes man shines in the truth is like a proverb. Good decent work by the poet and pat on his shoulder as a simple complement...............

'Stars tinkle in the sky Moon shines in the night Sun glitters in the noon Man shines in the truth' Yes man shine in the truth is like a proverb. Good decent work by the poet and pat on his shoulder as a simple complement...............

(((Yet Humanity is rare quality, Man shines in the truth))) I like these lines, ! ! ! ! ! ! marvellous! ! ! ! ! 10+++ ((Childhood, youth, beauty, love, The four things, I like)) , Great poem///..

Thank to fellow poets Indira and Arfa Iris for their Generous, truthful and hearty comments on this poem.

wow! amazing............ u r really fine poet........... with very wise thinking....

that's something wise........