Friday, January 10, 2014

Four Taoist Poems Comments

Rating: 4.8

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Scattered rocks lie
beneath the moss-covered boulder.
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Daniel Brick
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Aniruddha Pathak 24 September 2019

Four lovely spontaneously penned poems, a product of Taoism, and the notes below making things clearer.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 September 2019

Brilliant Taoist poems. I liked the one, " Walking in the Marsh Balancing one leg Without a thought in her head, the bird mocks philosophy" . Congrats on poem of the Day..

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2019

Congrats! When a poet thinks time stops for him, when a poet writes his pen travels with a speed, that of light.

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doug scotney 23 September 2019

lessons for humans from the non-human world

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Lyn Paul 23 September 2019

Tranquillity is felt so deeply in your words. The 4 pieces are perfect with a surprise in the speed of time in each piece. Your sense of calm is amazing.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2019

just tooo excellent please also enjoy my poems MOMS SMILES MANY LOVE IT U WILL DB

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Bharati Nayak 23 September 2019

Amazingly beautiful- -a timeless piece of writing. Each rock and each stone of earth is storehouse of immense mystery - - Wisdom scattered in the universe.Our life is too short to learn all- -and we know nothing of this truth. Congratulations Sir, Daniel Brick for penning such beautiful poems.

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James Mclain 23 September 2019

Great subject material, great poem Daniel. James McLain

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2019

Visited this poem for second time. Really a beautiful poem is presented. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem for second time as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2019

Rich in description and vividly captured with emotion. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Cynthia Deon 23 September 2019

Loved reading these. It has the tranquillity of nature woven into each stanza. I will definitely make an effort to learn about Taoist Poetry.

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Paul Brookes 23 September 2019

Beautiful and inspiring the flow of words are beautiful with humour and clearness.

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Dominic Windram 23 September 2019

Excellent poem of the day that beautifully articulates Taoist philosophy...well done Daniel!

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 September 2019

I don't know what to say ...... The barren branch knows so much more than I ever will in the Ten Thousand Years///// written greatly the Taoist poem

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Susan Williams 24 September 2018

It did my heart good to see you being honored for one of your works. All of your writings deserve this honor.

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Kim Barney 23 September 2018

Daniel, I know nothing about Taoist poetry, but these are very pleasing to read (and make me want to learn more) . Congrats on having them selected (again) as poems of the day!

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Glen Kappy 23 September 2018

Cool, Daniel! This one’s worth a repeat—correction—repeats plural. Yay! -GK

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Harley White 23 September 2018

Wonderfully lyrical and evocative, not to mention the subject matter which beckons us deeper... well done...

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Rini Shibu 23 September 2018

Congratulations Daniel for poem of the day...

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Lazy Poem Hunter 23 September 2018

What would it take to actually 'Choose' a poem for this honor?

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