Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Four Stages Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.9

She with child waged a fight
But baby won outright

Then she struggled with self
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 January 2010

It’s the contentment of Great Motherhood… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Claude H Oliver Ii 28 November 2009

Always, the grim reaper stands by.

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Prakash Mehra 13 October 2009

Experience speaks. You have narrated it too perfectly.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

She with child waged a fight But baby won outright Then she struggled with self Innocence and lighthearted left lovely, meaningful and praie worth bcse of its message....10 read mine beauty

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Words of wisdom here with this one Almedia......life is not easy and when reality sets in your poem gives the outcome. 10 love Karin

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Angelic Warrior 31 August 2009

brilliant! .....too true, its impossible for you to cheat death....its always there at the end.....great write!

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

wonderful realistical poem, a real philosophy, lovely to read...............

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beautiful poem so wisely said..loved it

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 August 2009

Custodian lost at the seam of vain.In vain she did cried.

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Steven S 25 August 2009

I love this one...not too crazy about the outcome though.

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