Four Short Poems Comments

All 4 poems bear the originality of its author- - 10++++++++ and onto my fav list where a lot of their brother and sister Soran poems sit all of them thought-provoking and bearing the unique style of Soran- - -

Flowers know How many days they will live And the nightingale as it sings knows how many seasons but we- - - - - - - - - - - > yes- -the " but we" inserts itself into the natural way of the earth God created and asserts its will - -the " but we" has been inserted and asserted way too many times leading now to the desperate straits our planet is now in- - - -10++++++++++

2 (The reality and fantasy) Life is continuing In its Utopia But the days are Dying Without ID- - - -you pose the difficult questions, Soran, leading your readers to think of things they have never thought of before- -I know my days at this end of life need the calendar to mark their passage- too many of my days die now without having lived, without any difference to the day before and the day before that- - - 10++++++

Dear: Rose Marie Juan-austin, hello and thanks.. after when I read your comments I came to conclusion that your eyes are very beautiful and your heart is so pure, that is why you are commenting such beautifully on my humble poems, I wish you all the best..I hope you enjoy reading good poems..

" The readers Leave the Poet Melting alone To mould a unique poem" Incredible lines of a great poem. Excellent write. Top Marks! ! Onto my Poem List.

These poems have their own strength and beauty. I concur with the wonderful comments of Susan Williams that these poems were woven by a Poet of extraordinary talent.

Four brilliant and one of a kind poems depicting the intricacies and aspects of life. Each and every poem has been crafted so beautifully with powerful lines and great imagery.

These 4 poems show tremendous range of talent. I no more say " ah, this poem is the best" than I read the next poem and think wow-he went even deeper and more lyrical and on it goes and when I reach the last powerful and challenging poem, I have to acknowledge that this poet has range and power and talent to burn. 10+++++++ and onto my fav poem list and my fav poet list

Seasons and reasons! ! Muse of life with, The romance of nature! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.