Monday, May 3, 2010

Four Seasons Without You Comments

Rating: 3.6

Nature comes to life with florescent flowers in bloom bright,
lively trees filled with colorful leaves. Birds chirp songs of love, signs of spring brings love to the forefront.In love we were reminiscing of picnics by the lake
followed by long walks in the park.Loving every moment as we watched squirrels at play. Thinking to myself the only thing more beautiful than spring is you.Happy times long since past.
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Margaret Shaw 16 September 2012

I agree with Robin. This is a fantastic piece. You writing style is different from the many types of poems that I have learned but none the less it is captivating. This is the first of your poems I have begun to read and feel like I will enjoy them all.

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Robin Bennett 21 July 2012

hey there, this was a sad piece. It started out with such promise for happiness. I like you love the fall, and was so sad to see you favorite season ripped apart. Again you are a master story teller, and I love your writing style. When ever I click on one of your poems I am always in for a treat. Another wonderful piece, my friend! -Robin xoxo

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Darkangel Flyfree 19 July 2012

Wow so sad and touching. Im so sorry for your lost. This poem is very good with lots of imagery, passion, emotions, and good memories! I really like this one!

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