Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Four Seasons With Him Comments

Rating: 4.8

green spring
full of colours
warm
refreshing showers,
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Loved this poem. Full of life. Love poems written about creation.

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Afzal Shauq 06 May 2010

it seems a fair and deep love..the idea of poem is good and impressive and heart feeling

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 22 April 2010

nice and different way to talk about the four seasons and it talks about the things that pple look forward to every season.... love it 10 with no doubt

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Afzal Shauq 12 April 2010

quite impressive and heart feeling poem..well done

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Jake Shelvey 10 April 2010

Only three poems, but all of them amazingly beautiful and sweet symphony to the mind. This is my favourite though.

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John Knight 07 April 2010

Hello Brenda - I can't believe I'm the first to comment on this lovely peom. I love poems about the Seasons they are so so evocative. Always start with SRING it is a reawakening of life and love. I would willingly fill your room with flowers. The lazy hazy days of SUMMER. Fun - perspiration - ice cream (to get sober or colder? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?) - sand - bare feet - careless creamy kisses. My Brother lives in Mexico (Puebla) and every day is Summer - no wonder they have a population problem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! AUTUMN - technicolour leaves - cooling - drooling - hand and hand in the park. WINTER - heralded by Autumn and eclipsed by Spring - but an excuse for mulled wine - Christmas Fare and cuddles by the fire - ah yes I remember it well! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Every season is my favorite - right now it's Spring - what about you Brenda - do you have a favorite? ? ? Thanks for sharing - a perfect poem - by a perfect poetess. Love through Poetry - JOHN.

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