Monday, October 5, 2015

Four Seasons Of You Comments

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You are the spring
You brought life back to me after the cold winter killed me
You embraced me in warm sunlight that seems like a dream
You became the sun; my source of energy.
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Roseann Shawiak 05 October 2015

This is an excellent poem! Your imagery is fantastic, rhythm is slow and deliberate, giving emphasis to your words. Very well written, congratulations! I am sure your teacher will give you an A on this one! Please keep writing, you have a good handle on English and an innocent and pure style. Write at least one poem a day and you will see a significant improvement in your work! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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0s1 Silver 05 October 2015

Thank you~ I'll work hard ^^

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