Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Four Seasons In One Day Comments

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Four seasons in one day
Rain and hail
Icy winter gale
Sunshine and warmth
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Ben Gieske 12 October 2007

Ever faithful on this spring eve - If it weren't for this line, I would think that the poem ends with winter and a hope for the next season to be spring. Your poem evokes so many ideas and thoughts.

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Alison Cassidy 10 February 2007

I love the way you describe the violence of the weather to evoke your own dark moments and personal upheaval. And on a lighter note - only in Melbourne do we really experience four seasons in one day! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx

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