Four seasons in one day
Rain and hail
Icy winter gale
Sunshine and warmth
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I love the way you describe the violence of the weather to evoke your own dark moments and personal upheaval. And on a lighter note - only in Melbourne do we really experience four seasons in one day! love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx
Ever faithful on this spring eve - If it weren't for this line, I would think that the poem ends with winter and a hope for the next season to be spring. Your poem evokes so many ideas and thoughts.