Four Seasons In One Day Comments

In the valley down below! ! Nice work.

Wonderful poem, sums up our weather perfectly, I can remember a brief snow shower on the outskirts of Sheffield in July once! ! !

A brilliant piece..So nicely composed poem of your experience of four seasons- -Rain drops, flood, sunshine and snowflakes.How through our perception we experience the wonderful seasons in our life ! !

favorite lines: hard boiled raindrops we call hail and I go to leave, go up the town oh my god! a snowflake came down. ===================================== Annette, i just read 'four seasons in one day'. you had one heck of a weather day! i'll place this into Section A of October's showcase, thanks. i'm leaning towards leaving it 'as is'. not sure. maybe. it does have a few 'errors'. there are some other spots i at first wondered about but decided were 'good'. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - if i were to suggest 'corrections', they would be these: 'Dark and gloomy clouds desend'........in u.s. it would be 'descend'. i think it would be in U.K. as well, but i'm not sure. 'what's that I hear, a clap of thunder lightening won't be much longer.'.................scientifically-speaking, i believe the lightning is seen first, before the resulting thunder is heard, because the speed of light is much greater than the speed of sound. ;) i wonder if anyone will commentabout it except me. 'Dorns my raincoat, gets my wellies umbrella at the ready opens the door, what do I see brillant sunshine smiling back at me.'....... 'Dons'/'dons'..............[i believe you misspelled this in another poem ......................................................................................as well] ;) whoever said languages are easy? and 'brilliant'............oops! i BELIEVE i'll correct these two misspellings for the showcase. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i like it. nice rhyming, and i like that you didn't insist on always rhyming! i'll put this in Section A now and get to leaving a poem comment and reading the second offering from you later. i've got a backlog of messages, and i've got a chore or two to do offline today also. bri ;)