Tuesday, April 18, 2023

Four Sacred Words Comments

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I miss the lower school,
where you and I could just stay friends,
with no repercussions,
cause you and I were just kids then,
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Ash Desrocher
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D.N. Rebb 19 April 2023

What a powerful poem! Is the weight of faith a burden at times?

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Ash Desrocher 19 April 2023

Yes it can be, it's a huge burden when it wants to be.

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D.N. Rebb 19 April 2023

What a powerful P

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Kim Barney 18 April 2023

Unrequited love is the most painful kind. This poem is well written. Keep writing.

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