Friday, January 27, 2017

Four Prayers Of Adoration Comments

Rating: 5.0

for RoseAnn

O God of Peace, everywhere there is strife:
between water and earth, between fire and air,
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2017

This is really amazing. In a world full of strife, our soul seeks peace, silence and serenity. In our closeness to God, we can ascend to a state of rejoicing hard to find from worldly sources. A very enlightening write. A huge 10.

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Roseann Shawiak 28 January 2017

Daniel, thank you so much for these four prayers of adoration, they are exquisite, beautiful, so totally pure and honest coming from your heart. They have all found their home within my soul, heart and photographic memory forever. They are all above reproach, their essence is founded in a belief of God, I am sure God is overjoyed at seeing how completely you've found Him. These poems will be a part of my life always, thank you dear Daniel. RoseAnn

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Valsa George 28 January 2017

A wonderful prayer addressing God from four aspects of His eminence! Daniel, you have trapped the 'fever and fret' of the times so masterfully! In a strife ridden world, there cannot be true joy other than the one emanating from God! I cannot say which is the best of these four! All are equally good. Yet I am inclined to say the last two, I prefer more to the first two! Top marks!

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Daniel Brick 28 January 2017

Thank you very much, Valsa. I believe what you say that there can be no true joy except what emanates from God, but I believe that is the HUMAN CONDITION, and to expect otherwise stems from an inability to accept the tragic reality of our existence. I am torn between beliefs, one in a divine universe, the other in a human universe. And this poem is a sincere expression of that first belief in a divine universe.

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