Thursday, October 30, 2008

Four Poster Bed. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falsely draped now,
In not so new
Bed hangings,
Of nondescript hue,
...
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Fowler 02 November 2008

Like a scene from a period novel or stage set. Beautifully detailed. 10 for your vivid imagery. Warm regards, Sandra

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Kevin Wells 31 October 2008

So descriptive, this is like looking into a detailed portrait by one of the great masters. Great read!

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Tia Maria 30 October 2008

ahhh, you have me reminiscing of castle tours... how I have stood staring at those ugly heavily draped monstrosities now in museum type settings & wondered of the kings & queens in their historical scenes. Wonderful write 10/10

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James Roberts 30 October 2008

An excellant poem that is full of atmosphere and a great desciption of sleeping in the middle agesmiddle ages

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 30 October 2008

Nice Poetry Fay, as always.. Andrew 10

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Tom Balch 30 October 2008

Charming piece of historical write, well done Fay 10 from Tom

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 October 2008

Classic touch. great poem indeed.

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Fay Slimm

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