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A brilliant write worth to ponder about. Very interesting and grips the reader from start to the very end. A one of a kind write.

A wise write, inviting and provocating to ponder deep, lines both visible and, do play some games with us, parallels do converge, when lines stand imperfectly. The four directions are there to make great room for us, upward mobility is indeed more desirable than horizontal one, a beautiful write with material for mental excercise!

a diffrent poem very intersting i wish i can rate but i dont see that rate bar bit a 10

USAGE OF SHORTER SENTENCES HERE... BUT EXPRESSIVE...

u have a very different form of writing things.... this write has lots of lines between the lines..... :)

sometimes i have to exercise my mental muscles to get to the depth of your poem. its like modern art, open to individual interpretation. that's the beauty of your poems.-provocative poem. i feel iwill think about it a lot.10 we need to be flexible in life

Different directions meet to form a most beautiful poem. Well done, Andrew

lines in different directions, , , but streight line is where you end your poem, , , , , some artwork here in a structural manner, , ,10

Very good writing, Kesav. I look forward to reading more. Ron

your well knowledege of maths and physics has beautify this piece, great kesav

well expressed in a crisp and effective manner! creative content!

10 for your fascinating thoughts. You have a way with words. Kind regards, Sandra

Now, here is something to really think about. I find you do a lot of dep thinking and come out with great lines as these. You give occassion for celebration of thoughts and this is what a true poet must and should do. Thank you for your contribution to humanity....arya

Kesav, nice content and very well written. Ian

A capturing write Kesav! Though with these wise ones i must agree Counterbalance sounds right to me! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

«A line that goes up Vertically straight »but, Walk from east and on other directions it is a vital rhythm … yes, a beautiful reminder … 10

Interesting wordplay. HG: -) xx