Thursday, April 3, 2014

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The Soul
Wants to say but can't find the words

The Heart
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Alex Lane
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Doris Cornago 03 April 2014

Very reflective. I hope that you can expand more the repertoire of your language and so make poetry unlock the image now only slightly peeping through the door. I like your attitude though - brief and uncaring. A lot of potential for more. Do write more. i will be looking.

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