Our relationship's like a piece of music
We captivate each other with melodies mystic
With our love we create such blissful rhythm
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this is lovely, love can be so much like beautiful music, both sad and romantic
Very nice expressions through muse. However, it raises a doubt. Whether it is love or it is just an infatuation?
I like your comparing love to a song. Sadly, many loves come into our lives and end too briefly, like a four minute song. But these songs are just preparing you for the grand symphony..... that will go on and on. You already have your seat in the theatre of life; now it's just a matter of time. May the next music you hear be written just for you. I enjoyed your poem..... a nice play on words.
nice poem...nothing is for ever. Always remember that, so make the best of what you've got.
sorry about the ending of a love affair..... there'll be others. Keep your pen at work.. Regards Sally
Nice poem.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
It is the way life is and this poem describes matter of life well.
nice song sung through poetic words