Monday, September 28, 2015

Four Minute Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our relationship's like a piece of music
We captivate each other with melodies mystic

With our love we create such blissful rhythm
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JR Cuyam
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Sonali Ganguly 01 April 2016

nice song sung through poetic words

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Tracy Craighead 06 December 2015

this is lovely, love can be so much like beautiful music, both sad and romantic

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 October 2015

Very nice expressions through muse. However, it raises a doubt. Whether it is love or it is just an infatuation?

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Sranisha Francis 01 October 2015

Very good expressions.........

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Lorraine Colon 30 September 2015

I like your comparing love to a song. Sadly, many loves come into our lives and end too briefly, like a four minute song. But these songs are just preparing you for the grand symphony..... that will go on and on. You already have your seat in the theatre of life; now it's just a matter of time. May the next music you hear be written just for you. I enjoyed your poem..... a nice play on words.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 30 September 2015

nice poem...nothing is for ever. Always remember that, so make the best of what you've got.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 September 2015

sorry about the ending of a love affair..... there'll be others. Keep your pen at work.. Regards Sally

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Kassem Oude 29 September 2015

Nice poem, well rhyming!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 September 2015

Nice poem.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Paul Warren 29 September 2015

Sometimes love is only one way or an infatuation? Nice one.

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Raymond Farrell 29 September 2015

It is the way life is and this poem describes matter of life well.

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