Four Lines ~ On Love Comments

Superb! What else can one say.

Good enough 4 lines

Excellent: Love doesn't come in cute packages, it just happens~ There is no guarantee or warranty attached to it, Nor you weigh it against gains or losses. The heart opens up and falls, just a free fall.

Sir this is beautiful portrayal of love. Excellent piece.

Yes a very cute love, .

excellent: Love doesn't come in cute packages, it just happens~ There is no guarantee or warranty attached to it,

Fantastic four liner Poem, dear Asim ji....The heart really opens up.....top poem with top stars