Four Liners 11-20 Comments
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Wind was still..so was the mango tree..no light
Dark new moon night.. hit me a fear spree.. a fright
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Very pleasant to read the 20 Quatrains with the accompanying interpretations, it draws the reader's attention to what the poetess means.5 Stars Full Score and myriad more, dear Poetess. I really enjoyed it
ever four liners' themes are very crystal to understand; nice to read all through your poetic gist; I enjoyed specially the series '15 A Poem On The Banyan Tree '
True that we cannot set English poems to Sanskrit meters. But with their structural rhythm and exquisite rhyme-scheme, they qualify as Muktakams.
Indiraji, please name the New Form of Poetry as "Muktakams"! They are.
Thank you dear poet for your comment and the suggestion....let me first finish the100th poem in this series as I have done with my one liners, two liners and five liners...
Thank you dear poet for your comment and the suggestion....let me first finish the100th poem in this series as I have done with my oneLater if this series still appear to be like Muktakams, yes, I shall happily add the new name
Thank you dear poet for your comment and the suggestion....let me first finish the100th poem in this series as I have done with my one liners, two linerBut for your information I know only Tamil and a little bit of English...neither Hindi nor Sanskrit I know...thanks again dear poet
Lovely ‘Four Liners". Each poem setting a standard of its own. With soft rhyme scheme, they touched my heart, each of them. Like the most famous illuminating stand-alone Sanskrit shlokams called "Muktakam"..
Roses have thorns to prevent predators but man is wise to use tools to pluck them. Does God hear their cry? Loved this insightful expression.
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9/6/2025 5:51:29 PM # 1.0.0
It gives me a great pleasure to revisit this fabulous poem dear madam....Great!