Tuesday, April 13, 2021

Four Liner - Sacred Comments

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If you try to pull out of my eyes,
the sacred pearls, kept hidden from this world,
by draining me emotionally.
I shall hide them in my heart, like soaked dreams.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Zoyza Da Vinka 15 April 2021

Brilliant four liner....Soaked in dreams.

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me poet yeps poet 13 April 2021

WOW...If you try to pull out of my eyes, the sacred pearls, kept hidden from this world, by draining me emotionally. I shall hide them in my heart, like soaked dreams.

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Kostas Lagos 13 April 2021

I shall hide them in my heart, like soaked dreams....such a marvelous line!

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M. Asim Nehal

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