Friday, April 16, 2021

Four Liner ~ Rubaiyat ~ Struggle Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Once a spider webbed the dreams around
And I got stuck in it for the lifetime
Struggling my way to come out once again
And to reach the light of the day that I lived.
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M. Asim Nehal
Dreams
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2021

Asim ji, i love these Rubaiyat poems that you write. Short four liner poems with high philosophy both intense and meaningful. Top stars

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Darren Jkoeryo 17 April 2021

Great philosophy withapt metaphor.

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Michael Jack 16 April 2021

Hopeful poem...Struggling my way to come out once again And to reach the light of the day that I lived.

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Shreya Hacks 16 April 2021

Yes caught in spider's web is a great metaphor for the life.

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