Thursday, June 21, 2012

Four Formidable Ravens Comments

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Four formidable ravens, all in a row,
Prancing and cawing on the ground.
Plucking the feathers off a dead crow,
God what a horrid sound.
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Juan Olivarez
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Captain Cur 29 June 2012

All in the name of survival. Artfully written and garishly described. Great work.

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Smoky Hoss 28 June 2012

I believe Eric's comment (below) is right-on; this is a perfect metaphor for such. And a durn-good poem to boot!

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Eric Cockrell 22 June 2012

could just as easy be the rich plucking at the bodies of the poor! great poem!

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Valerie Dohren 22 June 2012

Sounds like a Parliamentary gathering! ! - seriously though, excellent write, very descriptive, can visualize the scene.

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Heather Wilson 22 June 2012

Gory but brilliant description of the scavengers just having a meal.

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