Sunday, September 25, 2005

Four Fifteen A.M. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am preparing chicken salad
and while the meat cools
in the colander
in the pocket of the sink
...
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Jeffrey SpahrSummers
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Max Reif 25 September 2005

a powerful piece, so grounded in the images.

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Raynette Eitel 25 September 2005

That final line about women really makes this a poem. It gave me pause for thought. Poor little screaming half grapes...and I suppose, poor little women in your life! Hmmmmm. Raynette

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Jeffrey SpahrSummers

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