Saturday, July 7, 2012

Four Elements Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fiery as it is,
It lit the world up in a
Raging blaze,
Effacing away every trace of life from the world.
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Nick Leow
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Haden Chua 17 July 2012

Nice poem with a great layout. The theme is great too.

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Captain Cur 07 July 2012

Excellent poem about the 4 elements with some great philosophy adding a rich fifth dimension!

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