Thursday, October 10, 2013

Four A.M. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds move out
Stars move in
Full moon speaks not
The crickets hush not
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Savita Tyagi
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Susan Lacovara 20 November 2013

I found this to be a soothing write, as I also experience the restless hours pre dawn...your words wash over me like a sprinkled mist of early morning rain...refreshing and soft..well done! PEACE

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A pleasant moment in the still night A diamond only a poet like you can find At the witching hour seeing the moon You have seen real beauty's fleeting shine...... Very good poem Madam, and I welcome you to my page too for your comments

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Valsa George 06 November 2013

Another dawn waits at the door step! So drive away all weariness and greet the brilliance of the waking morn! A great write! !

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Beach Girl 29 October 2013

Very beautiful poem! Serene and calming but also a little sad. I love the verse 'Night moves on unhurried to give way for another dawn'

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