Fountain Of Youth Comments

Bright and enduring words of hope, it's what we all need. Thanks Dave, good one!

Captivating language with a prosaic flow. An excellent picture is painted in the first stanza, then expounded upon and made meaningful in the second stanza. It's actually pretty amazing what you've accomplished with so few words! Thanks for sharing.

Youth is blossom until autumn comes/ really a good poem! ! !

A very timely message to the youth, and to everybody.

nice poem, great thoughts for your life

Good one. Like it. I like your work.

Live life to the full. Use it well. Beautiful message through nicely crafted lines. Thank you.

Very well said, Fountain of youth is draining away...thoughtful poem especially for youngsters..Loved reading it.

A good messagte Dave, have you read my sonnet 82 on youth? ?

Thats it. Shortly, but very strong. ...a fountain of youth is draining away...

a good message in this poem. nicely written