Friday, May 19, 2006

Fountain Of Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Beautiful Light
Oh how I cry at its beauty
Shining so lovingly
I wait to visit this Garden
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Dustin Bennefield
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Daniel Tyler 19 July 2006

I wait to visit this Garden The Garden of Light Flowing from the fountain, God What turn of phrase you have, lovely repetition of garden there, poetic but in everyday language still. This is super. I did a poem which referred to a fountain of light, 'Glide Me Till Senseless' it's called.

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