Fountain Comments

From the depth with deep and profound elucidation Nice distillation and escalating 10 Ms Nivedita UK

A profound and deep poem, From Original Sin to Eternal rest You make us walk through Tall and green forest trees When suddenly it opens out Into a clearing where falls A sheet of shimmering water Into a deep clear cool pool The spay it refreshes us The shade it gives us rest And I meditate in communion With my God! Most wonderful poem I've read, my fav too. Angel

good job, good writing that calls for purification of the mind. well expressed.

Just beautiful in every way- a joy to read and read again. Thank you for Brilliance.

I agree with Arijit this is so exquisite, beautiful expressive.I loved it a 10

Well written sandhya

My head Thou washeth In baptism clean My sins of Adam And of Eve That original sin I just simply love this poem....so soothing & devine...thanks for sharing it....100+++

I'm speechless... Just 'wow'... Nice one.. ^-^

wow! it simply flows ...............................................Oh glorious liberty! !

untroubled where I lay....... lovely composition, truly enjoyed your work. thanks for sharing.

A beautiful poem! Let the fountain of love from within flow, embracing life to make us glow! 10! -Raj Nandy

Your words flow like the fountain, beautiful and refreshing. A touching poetic rendition of a prayer. Thank you very much for sharing.

An eloquent prayer. You are indeed a wordsmith worthy of the name. Warm regards, Sandra

wow! great! amazing! a true beauty excellent work

the lord cleanses our hearts and souls. a miraculous wonder to behold. in this poem you can feel his strength coming out to touch you. A GR8 WRITE A TEN

Vrey nicley done, and with a very nice flow......

Very good poem, light and sweet 10

fountain here refers to ''continuous'........good idea expressing fountain of love... naizz

a lovely thought expressed with clarity and beauty

Your words run breathless from your pen. Truly undeniable! !