Sunday, November 29, 2009

Found And Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could stay I found something great,
But I never actually found you.
You were distant towards me,
Never saying what I wished to hear.
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Tracey Owens
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george george 30 November 2009

Such a sense of loss and melancholy! Truly evokes feelings in the reader. Nicely done!

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