Tuesday, March 31, 2009

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Once upon a time I found him,
I fell immediately. I waited for him.
I fell more in love with every message back and forth.
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Samantha Bunn
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Paige Nielsen 06 April 2009

AWWWW, that's cute! The repetition works well. The different methods of 'delivering love' were a nice touch. Woo. Also, just as an aside, you spelled 'tragic' wrong in your other poem, Beginning of the End.

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