Thursday, June 21, 2007

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Still in pyjamas I awoke,
thought to myself 'this is a joke'.
Said out aloud, 'Attila, brother',
reached for the phone and called my mother.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Brian Jani 26 June 2014

I was smiling all the way to the last line, nice poetry man! !

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Alison Cassidy 22 June 2007

A familiar theme couched in a clever poem. Your have a wonderful command of rhyme dear Herbie, and a sense of humour that seems amazingly British, coming from one who hails from Germany. Your last line in particular is brilliant! love, Allie xxxx

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