Still in pyjamas I awoke,
thought to myself 'this is a joke'.
Said out aloud, 'Attila, brother',
reached for the phone and called my mother.
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A familiar theme couched in a clever poem. Your have a wonderful command of rhyme dear Herbie, and a sense of humour that seems amazingly British, coming from one who hails from Germany. Your last line in particular is brilliant! love, Allie xxxx
I was smiling all the way to the last line, nice poetry man! !