Friday, January 31, 2014

Forty Seven Years Comments

Rating: 5.0

We met in nineteen fifty five
and never noticed love arrive.
We little thought it would survive
for forty seven years.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Smoky Hoss 03 February 2014

Superb, and beautiful. The depth of the soul is in these words.

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Paul Reed 03 February 2014

A great tribute to the power of enduring love

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Joseph Anderson 01 February 2014

A solace for our souls.-Written with simplicity, brevity and great compassion. It is so great that she could see this. The repititive lines on each stanza ties it all together. A comforting keeper

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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2014

That's beautiful! What a tremendous pen! Bravo! Touche! To your pen, Sir! And to the both of you... I tip my hat and graciously bow.

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Valerie Dohren 31 January 2014

50 years is pretty good going - great poem too.

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